There's a reason I should never be allowed time to think, especially about myself...
Full of impurities
She's the only one I see
Not remotely pretty
Far from being popular
Never going to be
Voted homecoming queen
The only part about her
That anyone would stand
Would be her caring heart
Her wide open hand
But no one waits to see
What may be hidden inside
Rushing to get away
They brush all feeling aside
Leaving her standing
All alone in the world
the message i dislike, but the execution was well done. this is one of your best rhyming pieces (i dont know how often u rhyme in your poems, actually)
ReplyDeletei am so random its not funny. haha. i rhyme for like two lines then ditch it cuz its too hard or something then pick it up later. I'm weird, but its all good!
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